By Roxy Sloane © September 2014
Rate: NC-17 (Mature)
I normally read paranormal, thrillers, occult, mysteries, or drama. I haven’t gotten too much into the adult material, but this story was thrilling and dramatic. I also love the twist at the end. I enjoy that it is written in both perspectives. I feel it is something that both men and women can read.
This story is a mature titillating roller-coaster of tease and lustful whimsy.
Normally, I would push for more professional terms for adult pieces, but I like how straightforward this piece was. I feel like I could read it for what it was . . . two people crazy about each other allowing their playfulness get more intense as the night goes on. . .
I will tell you if you offended by lustful direct scenes that would make you blush if read in mix company than I would suggest reading it alone.
I think that Roxy Sloane got the lustful feeling and drives spot on.
I would rate this 4 ½ pages.
Favorite lines. . .
You’ve seen one, you’ve seen them all. Now get to it, scoot!
Sloane, Roxy (2014-09-16). The Invitation (Kindle Location 301). Roxy Sloane Books. Kindle Edition.
We stare hungrily at each other. In the dim light, his face is shadowed, but I can see the desire written all over his face.
Sloane, Roxy (2014-09-16). The Invitation (Kindle Location 425). Roxy Sloane Books. Kindle Edition.
He pushes every one of my limits, and makes my fantasies come true. Now I have him all alone. No interruptions. Nobody to see.